Monday, November 3, 2008


Here's a nice little poem I found of mine...

I tried my old habit again
I soared to high places again
the hum of the core,
the energy of the response,
the twinkle in the eye
the instant gratification-

-all awkwardly remind me
with a sudden break typical in rhetoric and rhythm
why I left in the first place...


  1. So cryptic. What does it mean?

  2. You can fell the longing and the snap-out-of-it train of thought in this poem. The hum of the core? The energy? This is really interesting and intriguing. I agree with Joey, I want to know what is going on here.