Here's a nice little poem I found of mine...
I tried my old habit again
I soared to high places again
the hum of the core,
the energy of the response,
the twinkle in the eye
the instant gratification-
-all awkwardly remind me
with a sudden break typical in rhetoric and rhythm
why I left in the first place...
So cryptic. What does it mean?
ReplyDeleteYou can fell the longing and the snap-out-of-it train of thought in this poem. The hum of the core? The energy? This is really interesting and intriguing. I agree with Joey, I want to know what is going on here.
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